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And out from the depths...

Sat Jun 23, 2007, 3:32 AM
It's been a while. Yes, I realize that I haven't been around for a looooooong time. There are reasons, naturally, which I'll go into shortly, but I notice that I'm not the only one who's been slightly less than active over the past few months.

Firstly, Charybdis - I wrote myself into a corner. Not because I didn't know what to do next, but because I gave too much info too soon and destroyed the pacing of the entire sequence. It's to be expected. After all, this is the first project that I've attempted with this sort of scale, but sadly it appears to have failed dismally. So I'm not writing any more, unless my muse gives me the energy to start from scratch. Besides, nobody was really reading it anyway ;)

Secondly, game development - Yes! I've been making games over the past year. Not particularly good games, but as a member of a small but vibrant community I've found that it's something that I enjoy immensely. As such, I've been diverting the majority of my time in that direction. I enjoy it because game design is a perfect fusion of engineering and art - it allows me exercise both my inclinations at once! Not many hobbies can claim that! Either way, that is one of the main reasons that I've been so quiet lately.

If my muse permits, I'll probably start writing some of the short stories in the manner of my earlier work. I have ideas rattling around in my head, as always, but I need to take the time to write them down and avoid the misery that is the Great Charybdis Experiment. Fear not, those who I watch who still read my journals, I'll be getting around to your work as soon as I can. Unlike me, you guys actually have a little talent, and it's good to read/see the work of talented people :).

Enough angst. I have Deviations to check.

  • Mood: Annoyed
  • Listening to: Music
  • Reading: Books
  • Watching: Anime
  • Playing: Uplink and Deus Ex
  • Eating: Foodz
  • Drinking: Liquid matter

Table of Contents and more!

Fri Oct 13, 2006, 10:06 AM
Yes, I've decided to post a new journal entry, but first...

*My Stories to Date (from most recent to the depths of history ;)). ANY AND ALL COMMENTS APPRECIATED. Underlined titles are hyperlinks!*

> Charybdis – Sci-fi / Action
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 (Undergoing gradual assembly)

In the years following the catastrophic Corporation Wars, human civilization has built itself back up again, thanks in no small part to the mighty Morbex Corporation and their interstellar Jumpstation technology. When a mysterious hacker breaks into the supposedly unbreakable Morbex central mainframe, and then proceeds to effortlessly elude an entire city full of Morbex Corporation Security Force operatives, the company goes on high alert. But this is just the first (and most insignificant) of many incidents that find MCSF soldier Yvonne Delacroix slowly being drawn into a conflict that threatens to break apart the very core of civilization in the known – and unknown - galaxy.

> Music– Sci-fi / Philosophical

Cultured Mr. Hewson is shocked when his son comes up with the most far-fetched and outrageous idea ever – starting a band.

> The Stargazer – Sci-fi

Rebellious teenager Dana Rae is sick of the tired, monotonous life on board the Worldship, Humanity’s interstellar Noah’s Ark. With their entire lives and social structures ruled and prescribed by the Worldscheme of the ships designers, she alone seems to feel that their lives are worthless. Only the Stargazer, a seemingly useless robot, brings her any comfort. But when the Worldship encounters a wormhole that could shorten their journey by several hundred years, Dana’s rebellion is turned on its head.

> Quantum Leap – Sci-fi / Racing

In the high-speed, high-tech, and even higher-stakes world of Steed racing, three-time champion “Lightning” Leon Lassader is the best of the best. Only one problem – the revolutionary (and expensive) new Quantum Core reactor that he and Team Lassader R&D man Moses Makwane have developed isn’t winning races, and his sponsor isn’t impressed with the lack of victories. With Team Lassader in danger of being shut down, Leon has two days to get the unpredictable and unstable Quantum Core up and running before his next race. Hope seems remote, until they find help in the least likely person imaginable.

> Scavenger Hunt – Sci-Fi / Comedy / Mystery
Part 1 | Part 2

Life as a Scavenger Hunter requires a sharp mind, brilliant deductive abilities, a competent grasp of technology, and a good dollop of suicidal insanity. Gaz Nuclear has all of these (to compliment his stupid name). What he doesn’t have is money, which is why he finds himself on a client-sponsored luxury cruise on interstellar starliner “Elysian Fields”. He’s been contracted to do his job, i.e. to find and covertly procure a particularly rare and expensive item. Did we mention that the item in question already belongs to someone else? No? Well, it does. And this is just the beginning Gaz’s many, many problems.

> Infested Traveller – Sci-fi / Philosophical

A member of a race ancient beyond imagination is struck with a rare and mysterious disease. A disease that may require drastic action to cure…

> Human – Sci-fi / Philosophical

Zye is the perfect pilot, having spent his entire life alone on board an experimental starship, following instructions provided via radio by the enigmatic Ground. But on the eve of the ship’s groundbreaking test, a surprising event changes Zye’s perception forever, and places the entire Project in peril.

> Fall– Descriptive Prose.

My first submitted Deviation. Was popular amongst the poets though. :shrug:.


And now...

Lamentations

Just some quick bloggage for those who kindly take the time to read it. First: Charybdis Part IV is indeed in progress after a brief hiatus brought about by writer’s block (read Half-Life: Episode 1 and my other hobby of amateur game design). I’ve taken a new approach to planning it that should render it better-paced than Part III, which was NOT as coherent as I’d have liked. Alas, the limited feedback on the piece hasn’t allowed to me to gauge whether I should rewrite it or not, so I’ll forge ahead with Part IV regardless and hope I can make it better in my own eyes. There’ll be some revelations, oh yes… Much more revelation is planned… :plotting: Alas, as for what Charybdis actually is, you’ll have to wait. :( So sad for you.

I’m also planning my post-Charybdis projects. Yes, there are two/2/II. The one is a short story relating to my favourite theme: screwing with time and the ensuing paradoxes (alas, my Latin grammar sucketh. If anyone knows the proper plural for “paradox”, let me know ^^;). I’m not sure if my particular take on it has been done before (probably), but I’d like to write it anyway. It won’t be anything fancy, and it’ll be short, sweet, and philosophical in the vein of my earlier work.
The second is another little (hah!) story I’ve been working on since high school with the original intention of turning it into a graphic novel. I’ve actually already written some of it in the form of a teaser trailer thing that I sent to for consideration. Given her enthusiasm over it, I’ve decided to render it as another multipart story. I’ll probably post the intro as a scrap in the next couple of weeks as a quick concept test. As always, commentary is met with immense gratitude and binge-drin… er… celebration.

Finally, a long-belated promise must be fulfilled. is a young lady who has just entered the happy world of literary creation. Maelstrom, her first short story, takes clear inspiration from X-men, but the execution is quite different. It’s a little rough around the edges here and there in terms of grammar and construction, as should be expected from a first-timer of her age, but in my opinion the spark of talent is definitely there. Take a look - there are fifteen or seventeen short chapters so far, so you can read it in short snippets – and give her some support. Now if only she would get around to finishing it :(

And that’s it!

Write on!

  • Listening to: Computer fan
  • Reading: Devart interface text
  • Watching: My monitor
  • Playing: Half Life 2:Episode 1
  • Eating: Edibles
  • Drinking: Drinkables

Alive!!!

Sat Aug 5, 2006, 10:48 PM
Cold over. No worries. Sickness sucks.

Charybdis Part III now consists of one glorious paragraph. And some cover art, which I've uploaded for your viewing pleasure until I finish the latest instalment.

I just hope that my cover art is actually giving people pleasure and not being detrimental to the story. By posting cover art, I show you EXACTLY how I envision this stuff, and it could be that it takes away from your enjoyment of the peice. After all, we read to exercise our imaginations, and here I am spoonfeeding you mental images. To those who read Charybdis, I'd like to know. That way I don't waste time on cover art and spend more time writing ;).

Speaking of which, back to writing! Writing is fun!

I shall write on! And so should you.

Alive!!!

Sat Aug 5, 2006, 10:48 PM
Cold over. No worries. Sickness sucks.

Charybdis Part III now consists of one glorious paragraph. And some cover art, which I've uploaded for your viewing pleasure until I finish the latest instalment.

I just hope that my cover art is actually giving people pleasure and not being detrimental to the story. By posting cover art, I show you EXACTLY how I envision this stuff, and it could be that it takes away from your enjoyment of the peice. After all, we read to exercise our imaginations, and here I am spoonfeeding you mental images. To those who read Charybdis, I'd like to know. That way I don't waste time on cover art and spend more time writing ;).

Speaking of which, back to writing! Writing is fun!

I shall write on! And so should you.

*Snurf*

Fri Jul 14, 2006, 10:38 AM
So sick....

I have bloods in my germstream...

Sinuses hurt......


Just wanted to share the misery. You may now continue with your regular lives. But first.....

*AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOO*

There. Through the miracles of computer technology, I have just infected the bunch of you. And sprayed my computer in various fluids.

:evillaugh:

*sighs and wipes computer*

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